The Whatnot

This book is about the Whatnot it is a really interesting story what is it about?

No one noticed the soldier. HE stood up in the middle of the ballroom, and no one saw. Brightly colored frocks whirled around him. Coattails spun past. the laughter and chatter filled the air, and the clockwork maids sped right up to them with their heavy trays of glasses and red currant tarts, but never moved. His face was white as a bone. Blue shadows stood under his eyes, and his uniform the blotted with

mud.

Mr. jelliby did not notice him either, not at first.

He was busy being worried and little bit irritated, leaning against the fireplace and watching the guests as they moved toward the dancing floor.

That is my story about  The Whatnot but that is not the end of the story it is a chapter book if you want to borrow this book you have to go to the panmure library.
this my story about the  The Whatnot

My Holidays

Wednesday 22nd October

In the holidays I went to the Panmure  pools with my my mum sisters and nephews.I was having a good day, but the pool was really packed making the water level rise. The water was getting harder to swim in. The life guards were watching us swim in the water safely.

Two and a half hours later,my dad meet us at the swimming pools. My dad is a really strong and fast swimmer. I liked the part when my dad jumped into the pool from really high up on the diving board.The lifeguard told my dad off for jumping in the pool and making a really big splash. The lifeguard said  “don't do that again”, dad was really frightened because he thought he was going to get kicked out of the pool.

Twenty minutes later,the pool started to calm down, heaps of people had headed home for the day. It was time to get out of the pool and get changed, my cousin said that he wanted to stay in the pool until it was nighttime. Me and my dad thought that would be fun but you can't live in the pool for to long, you would never to able to fall asleep. 

Later on we went back to my house to have lunch, we had mince and cheese pies. They were really delicious, mince and cheese is my favourite pie. After lunch  we went outside to play hide and go seek.  I was the courter, trying to find everyone who was hiding. I counted to twenty, it was hard trying to find everyone. I started to get bored so I gave up the game and went inside. When everyone came out of their hiding spots, I came running outside. They didn't know I had gone inside so they will never know I cheated.                         

My blog comment to Oh Hsen

problem solving

This is what I did for my problem solving.

My kiwi quiz

I scored 10 percent in my quiz wish me luck

Kiwi quiz

I scored 40 pi sent in my quiz I try my best  

Recount with a twist

MONDAY 1st of september

once upon a time me and my brother went to panmure bowling to play each other game

the first games was the lazer games my brother and I played laser games the rule in the game was no punching  

and no pushing or swearing and no hitting guns

when I was close to the flag wakk! a tall older boy that is older like me but when i got hit I collapse and I went to the hospital

I told the nirs what happened to me

that a boy older like me smacked me with a gun

when I tried to get the golden flag. who ever got the golden flag that means that you can have the golden flag forever and never give it back.

The nirs went to get my family when they saw me they best me to be held. When I looked at the window I saw a  big bird singing a song at me.

I said to the nirs to bring the bird inside to be singing to me so I can sleep because I felt really tired my family said they brought me fruits and noodles. I said thank you .

4 weeks later. When I got out the hospital I  missed being in my room because I loved walking around the rooms. I waited at the bus stop. When the bus arrived I missed my parents visiting me. 40 later. When I arrived home quickly opened the gate then I went

to quietly opened the door I went to my parents room. I shouted out surprise!!! my parents were excited for me my mum was screaming and my dad was pretending he was frozen I covered my ears so hard that my mum was screaming they were like that because they were so excited.

             My family and I is really happy together for ever. my family invited all my cousin and uncles and everyone to come and have a barbecue at my house that we lived happily after.
I writ tend this story about the twist It is all about my favourite story I rote about. I hope you all love it