I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson, and Ms Kirkpatrick.
Friday, 11 March 2016
Wednesday, 9 March 2016
Pumpkin story
Pumpkin Story
One day Lee went outside with his granddad to plant seeds to grow a pumpkin. When Lee and granddad got to the backyard, Lee planted the seeds and granddad poured the dirt to cover the seeds so the pumpkin can grow.
After a few weeks the pumpkin plants flowered, then after a few months the pumpkins were ready. When Lee and Granddad went to the garden they saw that the pumpkins were huge.
They harvested the pumpkin and took it into the kitchen. They chopped the pumpkin into little pieces so they could put it into the big pot. While Granddad was cooking the pumpkin, soup Lee went outside to put out the chairs.
The soup was finally finished and granddad and Lee went to sit outside to enjoy their delicious pumpkin soup.
Tuesday, 8 March 2016
Monday, 7 March 2016
Kayaking Trip
Kayaking Trip
One peaceful morning there was a boy named James. James was getting ready to go kayaking, he was so excited. But not the only one that was really excited but his group and a leader. James thought about himself for a minute he remembered that time when his Dad went on a trip far away on a boat and crashed along a island filed the ice. James was really nervous to go but the only thing he had was his mum and friends.
After 2 hours James was already in the boat but went he looked across the water james friend Kyle was taking a leak but left behind. James screamed out AHHH !!! oh no said James now that i’m here and he's there we can’t just turn around and go back we won’t be allowed to turn back around said James.
James yelled out loud to the leader and said KYLE IS LEFT BEHIND!! but the leader said is the mouse stuck at the bottom. But James yelled out louder NO KYLE IS LEFT BEHIND!!! but the leader said WE'LL HAVE TO LEAVE HIM screaming really loudly James cried and cried but could not be happy without being able to get Kyle so James turned around and went to get Kyle.
When they got kyle James was so relieved Fewww said James he was really happy they even stole their leaders lunch so they can have sea picnic on the kanu so they went ahead and did it and they all enjoyed there there day and lived happily ever after.
The end
This is my story that I made could Kayaking trip. If I was in the trip I would always do it
Tuesday, 1 March 2016
DRAFT
LI: To write a stretched sentence
Who - The sneaky fox
What - hunted
When - At midnight
Where - in the warm rainforest
Why - desperately trying to catch it’s prayer.
At midnight the sneaky fox hunted in the warm rainforest , desperately trying to catch it’s prey.
Tuesday, 23 February 2016
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